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Two Years Reviews
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Z
Chapter: 1
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Good Start - A great start for your fic! Really liked the ending. DDM
Chapter: 1
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() :( - Poor Misora.. POOR LUNA! Augh you've got me torn between the two. :( Anonymous
Chapter: 1
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Captain Deadpool
Chapter: 1
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Very Nice. - A good start, but you need to break up your paragraphs a bit, especially for dialogue. Makes it easier to read. Z
Chapter: 2
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. I thought the way you did the notes was a little... off, but that's not a big deal. Everything else was great, you really seem to have Luna's personality down. Anonymous
Chapter: 2
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Can you hear it? - I could practically hear her heart break. Good stuff! Captain Deadpool
Chapter: 3
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() This started off a bit on the rocky side, but it finished nicely. Captain Deadpool
Chapter: 4
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() So-So - It isn't about the quality, but this is obviously a trasitionary kind of chapter, so there's not much to comment on. Captain Deadpool
Chapter: 5
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Feel Good. - Don't know what it is, but the next few chapters make me feel good for some reason. Captain Deadpool
Chapter: 6
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Sly - That Luna's a sly one... Anonymous
Chapter: 6
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Anonymous
Chapter: 7
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Captain Deadpool
Chapter: 7
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() anon
Chapter: 8
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Captain Deadpool
Chapter: 8
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Fight Fight Fight! - Your first fight scene (to my knowledge) and you pulled it off well. anon
Chapter: 9
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Anonymous
Chapter: 12
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ZC
Chapter: All
Rating: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. My favorite parts were probably the arguments between Luna and WarRock. Some of the chapters seemed a bit long to me, but that's more just my tastes.
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