Chapter: 1
Rating:
I like it. ^^ Misora needs to learn that the whole world doesn't revolve around her. Anyway, good job. I look forward to the next chapter.
ZC
Chapter: 1
Rating:
The time thing there towards the beginning was a bit confusing (tomorrow, today). That's really the only thing that felt off. Other than that it's quite good, looking forward to chapter two.
ZC
Chapter: 2
Rating:
It's still pretty good, but this chapter just doesn't seem quite as good as the last one. Good luck on the next chapter.
